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Rain Shed….

Hello my lovely fellow bloggers!! I hope you’ll are safe and doing great.

The day we met,
Rain shed.
I loved your smiles,
And wanted to be with you for miles.
The way you held me,
To be with me.
It was surreal,
Felt like no one had held me for real.
You were gone when,
I hadn’t realized it then.
I wished for you,
And that I could have completed my every wish with you.
I don’t miss you,
Cause a part of me would always be with you.
You didn’t leave me empty handed to grieve for something,
But rather you left me with memories of everything.
I never wish that we hadn’t met,
Because from the beginning we knew we were not a set.
But it would have been easier,
If we knew it would have been this messier.
I cherish you now but a time will come,
When it would be blurry and I would be left with only memories of some.
Always you,
But not forever you……..

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81 replies on “Rain Shed….”

It is gorgeous. usually fail at getting emotional when I read poetry that is not “classical” one but here, I really felt something. By the way, did you ever consider putting music on your writing? I personally tried singing the poem, “just to see” and that was really cool, meant to be a song.
Have a nice evening! 🙂

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I am delighted to know it touched your heart, this is one of the best things I could have heard!!!!
Thank u so much 💞💕
I have given it a thought tbut I am not sure about it and how it goes about.
I would love to hear your recital to it, if possible why don’t you share the link to u as I am clicking on your site so apparently it is saying the site has been deleted.

It has been a pleasure and thanks a lot for showing love.
U too have a good evening, stay safe and tc!!
Happy reading💕😊

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I am happy that comment made your day. Well, I am still not confident enough to share my voice but when I will finally feel like it, I will send you some demo! You really should consider it, you have all the time in the world for it, but let the idea grow in some part of your brain and heart. 🙂

My website is camilletaboulot.wordpress.com, I do not get why but it always says the website has been deleted, I will try to fix that at some point lol.

Stay safe 🙂

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Wao such deep and complex emotions said so beautifully and simply.
No negativity for the one who left but still knowing that they can be cherished but can’t be forever and the memories might get blurry.
This is poem is a reflection if healing, learning and growing.
Loved it ❤

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Thank u sO much for ur lovely comment and encouragement, I can’t say that I get to rhyme everytime but sometimes it flows and I am sure you would also achieve that very soon…
My best wishes and regards to u😊😊💕💕

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Wonderful… universal message, too… I love how the poem begins with “The day we met,
Rain shed.”

And then the shape of the lines is almost like a mountain, a watershed, in other words… just lovely.

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Always you but not forever you.
So powerful. I wish I had that guts to say this.

I loved the whole poem mystery girl. From tip to toe it’s beautiful.

“I don’t miss you,
Cause a part of me would always be with you.
You didn’t leave me empty handed to grieve for something,
But rather you left me with memories of everything.”
These lines are amazing.

More strength to you mystery girl✨

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Thank u so much for ur love and lovely comment, it always brings a huge smile on my face.

I think then I passed poetry writing if u loved it….And thnx a lot for telling me which lines u found beautiful.
More strength to u as well.
See u around😊😊😊3

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