Sauntered beside me, you.
Inciting me to gaze at you.
Rendering me to inhale you.
Glorifying me, you.
Appalling me, you.
Desiring for you.
Abandoned me, you.
Cause I couldn’t afford you.
Special Thanks to Jay Bleu for inspiring me to write this and H.R. Phoenix for holding the Thursday Poetry Competition.
© Copyright 2020 Arshnoor Kaur Chadha. All rights reserved by Arshnoor Kaur Chadha.
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As you wish! ;D
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Gn🤔😂😊💤
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Ohh in that sense😅, my bad!
That’s your call, I’m just 23 which isn’t old enough to be called ‘sir’
Rest is your choice 😀
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Then I can’t choose so I am gonna combine the two and call u shaun bro. It sounds cool enough!!
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So subtle and intense!
I like how to ended it, with a huge bang just perfect for it…
too good yaar
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Thank u so much for your lovely comment and visit. I am so pleased that u liked it. Have good night and sleep tight!!
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Hehehh, you’re welcome! 😀
I’ll surely have a good night after I’m done with my day’s studies. Thank you, and wish you good health.
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Thanks a lot!!
What r u studying anyways?
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Studying for my CA exams..
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All the very best and lots of good luck sent ur way. My best wishes and regards👍👍👍👍
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Thanks a lot!, they’re really needed!
And what ’bout you!
What are you pursuing?
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To be honest that would be a really long answer cause I am sure but yet not sure but would definitely tell u in future maybe in a post.
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That makes me curious now! Can’t wait to read it. And I hope you’ve sorted it all soon, because you said you’re unsure.
You’re quite a mystery, which increases interests! Can I have the pleasure of knowing you name, pretty one?
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Well I always write it below my posts and it’s Arshnoor Kaur Chadha.
What’s ur last name?
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I’m Shaunak Jayakar, I just posted this once below my poem, for copyright purposes ofcourse,.. But you can call me Shaun, like everyone else!
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My bad I must have not read that post.😰😰
Okayz shaun.
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Heheh no worries, I’m sorry too, as I don’t get to read all you posts! I literally crave some time out so that I can lure around WordPress
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U will get it soon after ur ca exams
And no worries too!!
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Thnx for the hope😊😊
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I didn’t get this, hope?
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Oh u said hope u figure it out.
I had a question I think I might be smaller than u so do u prefer sir, Bhaiya or ur name?
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Lovely poem- with a sad ending.
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Thanks a lot!!💞💞❤❤
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Sometimes the shortest lines and poems have the most to offer; well-written
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Thank you so much!!!
Have a grt week ahead!!💞💞
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And what u said is true and this one agrees with it….
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Such a profound thought Mystery girl…I liked how it ended I cannot afford you!
Beautiful 🙂
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I am very delighted that u liked it….
See u around dear one!!
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Powerful lines, especially the last one. Well done! 😊💐
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Thanks a lot Roser, seeing ur comment makes me happy. Hv a good day!!
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Have a good day too! 😊☀️
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😊✨
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Beautiful , love the way 💚
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Thanks a lot for ur lovely comment!!
Hv a good day ahead!!
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You too !
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😊👍
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Congrats this poem is sooo good, it deserved to win! I love the twist in the end!
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U know what when this comment comes from the fragrance master and writer then it means a lot and I cAn think it is actually half good as what u r describing it as….
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Oh no, is it that good! And you just started blogging, too! You have a bright future ahead of you. So much so that I’m going to put on these shades 😎
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Lol😂😂😂😂
Let’s see how it goes
I hope you’ll be there to help me though.
Idk what should I make of ur sarcasm but let’s take it to be good😂😂
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hahaha I mean it and sure I’m happy to help you in any way 😀
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Commendable indeed!!
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Well, this is something deep from you.
I loved it.
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I am delighted to hear that. Hv a good day.
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Amazing poem 😊
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Thanks a lot!!
Hv an amazing week.
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I just read the post of Thursday’s competition winner, A very hearty Congratulations 💕💕 and you to have an amazing week ahead 😃😃🤗
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Thank you so much for your lovely wishes. My best regards to you💞💞💕💕
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Most welcome 💙💙
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😊😊✨✨
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So beautiful!! And congratulations on winning the contest!
Desire is a sin though…
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Thanks a lot.
I am delighted to hear that u found it pleasant.
Well, if the desire is rightful then it may not be a sin but if it is in a guilty way then it is a sin….🤔😂
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Desires are hardly ever rightful. That’s why they are called desires. But if you think so, I respect your views.
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And I respect yours, that is why they may not be rightful but maybe they can be turned so….
Hv a good day!!
Stay safe and tc.
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Interesting…
You too have a good day and take care!
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👍😊
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Beautiful poem….. And congratulations 🎊 🎊 🎊
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Thank u so much dear!!!!
Hv a good day. 💞💞
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Hey, I just heard that you won the contest. Congrats! This was a lovely poem👍🏼
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Thanks a lot for wishing me. I am pleased that u enjoyed it. Sorry for the late reply. Happy reading💞💞
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No problem 🙂
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😊👍
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Short lines and beautiful ones… !!! A fragrant poem indeed !!
Congrats for the win !!! ❤
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Thanks a lot for ur lovely wishes.
I am delighted that u liked it. Have a good day. Stay safe and tc. Sorry for the late reply.
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You are welcome dear.. much love ♥️♥️
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Love love💕💕
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🤗🤗🤗
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👍👍
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That last picture tied it together. Brilliantly written, Arshnoor!
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Thanks a lot💞💞 I am glad that u liked it. Hv a good day. Sorry for the late reply
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That’s alright. We all have days when we forget to reply to comments. I’m very guilty of that too.
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Thnx for understanding😊😊💞💞
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Beautiful
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Thanks a ton. Sorry for the late reply.
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It’s ok
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😊👍
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Beautifully penned. ❤
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Thanks a lot💞💞
Sorry for the late reply.
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This is damn beautiful Arshnoor..
❤️❤️
And congratulations 😊✨
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Thanks a lot Anushka 💞💞💕💕
Hv a good day.
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Have a good day to you Arshnoor💙
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Thank u💕💕
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Sorry for the late reply
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Hey common..!!
No sorries btw us plzz
Nobody is online 24*7 ya…
Gimme a smile now❤️✨
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U r the best😊😊😊😊😊
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Keep that pretty smile intact❤️❤️
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U know my smile grew more broad, thnx for making me smile today!!
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What can be more beautiful than this ..Arshnoor ❤️✨
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Well it would be if u r smiling too….
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Yes…you made me smile ❤️❤️❤️
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💕💕💕💕
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The glory in abandonment. 🙃
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😂😂 Abandonment makes great poetry..😰😰
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It has to. What else can be done with it?
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Well, if u hv received abandonment then u can definitely sulk, cry and have a huge tub(s) of ice cream but if u have given it, then enjoy ur freedom or maybe if u miss something u can do the same.
(P.s. Sorry for the late reply)
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Thanks for the reply
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Seriously??
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Hehe seriously
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😂😂ok..
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P.s. if u r thinking I meant u as in U no I meant in a generalised way……
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What! What??
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Nahi mujhe laga aap offend go gaye isiliye likha for the first reply……
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Arey kis baat ka offence, behen? Aisa kuch bhi nhi jao.
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Theek hai jaate hai 😂😂 bubye nikalana padega time as gaya humara
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Typo tha baba!
Aisa Kuch bhi nahi “hai”
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Ab mujhe sapna toh aayega nahi na…😂😂this is the third time today that I am writing” I hate Autocorrect” 😂😂
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Hahaha sapna batana kal
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Theek hai😂😂
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Guess what I had a dream like a really stupid one I saw ki Phoenix is a very old women with white hair, no offence to her she is a lovely person but idk why I had it and I was laughing so hard in the morning and then I remembered u asked for the dream man😂😂😂😂😂😂
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Hahah! You should tell her that. I bet she’ll come for you when she hears this. 😛
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Well I am so sorry for the late reply, I don’t know how this ended in spam.
Anyways I am not gonna tell her she’ll certainly come after me and kill me virtually. Have a good night though!!
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