She made my day,
Turning it to an unforgettable day from shit.
I promised her today that within few day,
A parcel she would be surrounded with.
But how she knew was behind my ken,
She pulled me out from the den.
Reading me become immortal,
Made me come out of the bottle.
Reading it I had no words to admire her words,
But flew like river, were my poetry words.
So I thought, why not another parcel get delivered.
To tell her, how her words made me quivered.
From the black soul, that I felt today.
She made that colorful and sway.
Her words showed the love she had for me,
And I can’t thank enough thee.
For he brought us together,
And got us to know each other.
No matter what, she has always been there.
Whether with long notes or mere.
I love you that you know.
Well, well I can’t let anyone know,
How you got that all correct.
Indeed, that love you have for got me eject.
Don’t forget, I never break promises,
A parcel is yet to come.
For this was just thank you the same,
For you my rhyming princess.
©Arshnoor Kaur Chadha. All rights reserved to Arshnoor Kaur Chadha.
80 replies on “She is always in my ❤.”
Happiest birthday to you Arshnoor❤️❤️❤️
I know….I am late here..to wish you. I had taken a break from WP for few days.
Rashmi told me that day itself..that Arshnoor is not not feeling good..It’s her b’day and see..she made your day…with a wonderful post.
And here you are😍 with another amazing one.
This is damn..!!!
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Awww……..u r so sweet I am so sorry for the late reply I just wasn’t able to find your comment. I hope whatever reason it was that u took the break from wp went well and everything is great. I am very happy u r here. Thanks a ton. I am so delighted to know u liked it.
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Amazing work..Loved it punjabi kudi
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Thanks a lot, I am glad you liked it!!!¡!💕💕
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Complimenting each other with words! This is impressive, Arshnoor. ❤
Now, let me search Rashmi’s comment.
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Aww….. U r way too sweet!!
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Thanks❤💕
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My pleasure! I enjoyed this totally. 💞
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😊😊💕💕
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Oh my dear little Princess, I love you so much and I say it with all my heart, I am sorry for late comment, but I read it soon after you posted it and you know how emotional both of us are I was unable to write you then.
But yes I loved it. I only intended to wish you, I did not expect a thank you post and that too this instant.
Oh Mystery Girl, you have my heart!
Take care, smile more because both of us want to see each other smile.
Your post did put a wide smile on my face. I loved each bit of it.
Take your time to deliver my parcel, I am waiting but at the same time I am patient to receive it because I Know it will be worth it.
I love you for everything My Mystery girl🤗
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I know I know and I know you know too!!!!!
Have an awesome day and go and rock!!
Sorry for the late reply I went to bed very early yesterday!!
Loads of love!!
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This made me smile wide too, girls! 😁
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❤💕
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Lovely!!!💞 Happy Birthday 🎂🎉🎊 Hope you had a great day!!!🥰😍
Don’t forget to Glee and spread Sparkles ✨
-Nani 💖
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Thanks a lot Nani!!! Long time no see!!! U r such beautiful person!!! Have a good day ahead!!!! Thanks once again!!!!!
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Aww!! 💞🥰 Your words makes my day truely gleeful!!!💖 hope to see you around a lot!!
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Sure, 💕💕
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You have been fabulous with words …….
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Thanks a lot!! Tc
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Welcome….. Yep I will take care …… And i apologize once again
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It’s ok
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Thank u so much😭😭
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😊💕
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You have been fabulous with words arsh….keep going…… I’ll always be there by your side …..
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Lovely!!
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Thanks a lot!! Have an awesome Sunday!!
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you too!
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😊💕
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Just beautiful!! And happy birthday again!
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Thanks a lot Harsh!!!! Have an awesome and super Sunday!!!!
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Sure. You too have a super duper Sunday.
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👍
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A lovely poem and I’m sure it’ll put a smile on her face❣️
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Also, happy birthday🥳
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Thanks a lot dear!!! Have an awesome Sunday!!!!!
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Thanks a lot Nathi!!!! And I hope so too!! HC an awesome Sunday!!
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Beautiful
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Thanks a lot!!
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You’re welcome
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😊💕
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it’s all very nice…
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Thanks a lot endorsum!! Have a good Sunday!!
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❤❤❤
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😊💕
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💕💕💕💕💕
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Aww this definitely made me smile!
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I am glad it did!! Have an awesome Sunday!!
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You too!
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A lovely poem that’s very expressive with its alluring contents… Thumbs Up!!!
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Thanks a lot geoffreyihagh!!!!! Have a good day!!!!!! Thanks for the support 😊😊💕💕
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Your words and this heartfelt poem will surely gonna make her smile Arshnoor 😊😊
And you are always good with your words
Happy birthday, once again 💙
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Thanks a lot Era, u r indeed r one kind and beautiful soul!!! Lots of love💕😊
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My pleasure 💙💙❣
Take care
Have a great day ahead ☺
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Thanks a lot!! Have an awesome Sunday!!!😊😊💕💕
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you are quite well with your words…Happy birthday ✨✨this will definitely make her smile and parcel too.
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Thanks a lot Sheena, I am glad u think so!! Have a beautiful Sunday!!
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😇😇
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Have a great day ahead!😇
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😊😊💕💕
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A beautiful write up for and by a beautiful soul and expressed likewise!💜😍
Indeed , your feelings carved in your words speak of your love for her. May Almighty bless you with such amazing friends,always.😊
Happy birthday to you.🎊🎀
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Aww…. I am so happy that u think that way and I am glad u liked it!! Thank you so much for the beautiful and amazing blessing!!!!!! I hope u get whatever it is u desire for!!
Thanks a lot Chetna!!!! Have an awesome Sunday!!
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Ahh! I too hope for the same😜
My pleasure and same to you.😊
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Thanks a lot!!!!😊😊💕💕
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This is outstanding work of words & I am sure that your voice will definitely reach to your loved one.
Keep going on with amazing work.
Stay safe & happy! 😇
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Thanks a lot Prashantt for all the love and support. I am so happy that u liked it!! Thanks!! Stay blessed!! Have an awesome Sunday!!
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I haven’t been in touch recently….. And there are reasons for it…… But mannn you are becoming so much better day by day with words…… Keep going …….. I’ll be back ……❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️……love you lots…… Also lot’s of love to my family
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you are too good with your words!!! and of course poem!!!!!!!! loved reading it… and when we write poem for someone we are attached… I think there’s no words only emotions that make that poem…. loved reading your poem
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Aww…. Thank you Ashee for your lovely comment and wishes, it made writing it so much better since you appreciated it!! Thanks a lot!!! Have a good day and thnx for the support!!
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