Across miles,
Away we sat.
Crying our hearts inside out.
The pain was wrenching.
It was killing.
No one to go to.
Even if surrounded were we.
Things tore apart.
Everything went downfall.
Picking up the pieces, gathering them wasn’t an option anymore.
Among those thousand of broken souls.
Lied two, miles apart.
Stories similar.
Didn’t knew each other.
But were able to feel the pain of the other.
Still broken.
Still apart.
Yet, they decided to trust each other.
©2020 Arshnoor Kaur Chadha. All rights reserved.
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62 replies on “Miles Apart…..”
Amazing!
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This is so touching! Reminds me of the last time I was in a long distance relationship.
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Thanks a lot. I am glad it helped you reminisce the memories.🤗🤗🤗🤗
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You’re welcome!
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Thanks a ton and I am really sorry I don’t know how your comment ended in spam
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Such a beautiful and heart touching post!
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Miles apart but close to heart..beautiful! 🙂
Hey Arshnoor, I have nominated you for the Liebster Blogger Award. Awaiting your response 😊. Check out the link https://rezscribblez.wordpress.com/2020/08/05/liebster1-blogger-award. Thank you.
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Thanks a lot rez! Hv a good day and stay safe.
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Please follow my blog
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Cool
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Heartbreakingly beautifully, Arshnoor ❤️
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Thanks a lot!
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So fragile, so needed, so lifelike, beautifully written.
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Thanks a lot dominikmons. I am glad you could get the gist.
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Have a good day!
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Very good poem. Thanks for stopping by my kitchen.
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Thanks a lot!!!! My pleasure🥰🥰 have a good day!!🥰🥰
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Thanks. Enjoy!
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Thank you 🥰🥰
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Beautifully penned ! Lovey message
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Thanks a lot!!!! Have a good day!!🥰🥰🥰🥰 welcome to the fam.
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This is so beautiful and deep, there are few connections those are beyond words but exist in thier own way & the this lovely verse reminds me few of them.👌📝💙
Keep writing & smiling!😇
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Thanks a lot prashantt! It really means a lot to me! Your comments always bring a smile to my face. Thanks a lot for always supporting me!
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Welcome…I have written something fresh after a long, I will be seeking your feedback Arshnoor provided you will get free.
Have a great day ahead!😇
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I visited your site prashantt before too by clicking the icon on reader but it’s showing site not available. Can you send me the link of your word press reader here please. I would love to read more of your work!!
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haha..I feel so😋
https://prashanttscribbled.wordpress.com/2020/07/31/something-i-never-thought-before/
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Haha thanks I will soon be there!!
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Lucky to have such a great connection
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Indeed!☺☺🥰🥰
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So beautiful…🌹
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Thanks a lot Ishita! You remind me so much of one of my friends named Ishika. Have an awesome day ahead dear!!🥰🥰
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Welcome🙂
Aw, that’s sweet! Have a wonderful day dear💕
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Thanks a lot dear!❤❤
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Loved this poem! It made me think of meeting my significant other, who makes me so happy, on Plenty of Fish six years ago. All the best! Cheryl
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Wow! I am glad I could do so, now when I read it I realize the relation could have been anything but I wrote it in a way of brotherly sister bond 🥰🥰
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Beautiful. A subtle reminder of a lesser thought upon truth.
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Wonderful interpretation. Thanks a lot.
Have a good day!!😀😀😀😀
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You are welcome friend! Have a fantastic weekend! Take care
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Take care, stay safe😊
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Likewise.
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👍😊
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❤❤
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❤😊🥰🤩
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Another brilliant post………
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Thanks a lot dear!!!!❤❤
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❣️❣️
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😊
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Such a lovely message in there… hope for those less fortunate!
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I am glad you thought so! I hope you are doing great!!!!
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Not too bad, but can’t wait for normality to return…
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I agree, this lockdown is starting to to take a toll on everyone. I hope and pray the situation gets better though. How are the cases where you live?
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It seems quiet down here in Hampshire…
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Oh! Never heard of Hampshire, where is it?
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The south of England…
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Oh! That’s cool😇😇
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Beautifully written 💛
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Thanks a lot!!
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😊🤗
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very well written. so meaningful. About connectedness, trust. a pleasure to read.
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Thanks a lot parneet!!!! It means a lot to me. Have a good day!!
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