She left me behind.
Screaming in pain.
Crying in rain
She left me behind.
In times of pain.
In times of vain.
She left me behind.
To let me grow.
To let me know.
She left be behind.
Hoping to see me anew.
From old to anew.
She left me behind.
©2020 Arshnoor Kaur Chadha. All rights reserved.
35 replies on “Behind.”
Fabulous.
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Omg..my heart skipped a beat right here..!
Penned so well🥺❤
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Aww….you are such a kind soul dear. Thank you so much. I really value your opinions, I never say this but you are awsm and so genuine. Have a nice day.
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You are so very welcome 🥰
It was such a great pleasure reading this piece.
I’m so honoured to hear this.😍 I so much value yours too, you are such a kind soul.
Have a lovely day❤
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Well-composed poem. A little sad, but I like the idea that being on your makes you stronger. Maybe that is a valid interpretation? All the best! Cheryl ❤
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Yupzzz it indeed is! Thanks a ton Cheryl dear 😀😊💕💞
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Just to make you stronger I guess 😊nicely penned
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Haha great interpretation but sad to break it down, most of my poetries aren’t that related to my life.
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Yes it’s sad! Nicely written.
👏🏼👍Ya I get that! When I share a sad poem with friends, they ask why am I so sad in life! They just can’t get that I wrote a poem and dint experience anything like that!
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Exactly! Thank you so much for your views!! How r u?
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I’m good 😊 life goes on. How are you? You work?
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I am good as well! Thanks for asking dear. I am not in a job. 💕💕😊😊
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👍😊
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😊😊💕💕
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great p0em! ❤️🤗
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Thank you very much dear 💕💕😊😊
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you are most welcome! ❤️
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😊😊💕💕
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🥰🤗❤️
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Beautifully written !
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Thank you era dear! 😀😀💞💞😊😊💕💕
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Pleasure is all mine 💙💙
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💕💕😊😊😀😀💞💞
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😖😖
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😂😂😊😊
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Sad, but beautiful!
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Aw. Your comment is true but yet sweet. Thanks for being here 😊😊💕💕
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Well expressed!!
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Thank you so much Hemalatha!😀😀💞💞
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My pleasure Dear!❤️
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😊😊💕💕😀😀💞💞
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Oops..Such a sad story
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Hiya! Indeed have different perspectives if you look closely. How have you been?
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👌
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😀😀💕💕
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