Living your dreams,
Held inside a shell.
Won’t it be dream,
If you come out of your well.
Playing and fooling around,
Isn’t going to help.
Hearing everyone’s sound,
Will never be of any help.
Breaking the shell open,
Living as per your conditions.
Coming out of the den,
Moulding the conditions.
Breaking free of the ropes,
Standing by your toes.
Throwing away the hopes,
Is a big nope.
©2020 Arshnoor Kaur Chadha. All rights reserved.
65 replies on “Gray.”
Inspiring poem, beautiful 🙂
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Aww…thanks rez 🥰
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Powerful and inspiring words, Arshnoor!!
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Hi Nathi! How are you? Long time no see.
Hope you are doing good. Thanks a ton. 😊😊
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I’m good and you’re too 🙂
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😃😃
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Simply beautiful …. Arshnoor ❤️
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Thanks 🥰🥰
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Welcome 🙃
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Beautifully written Mystery girl!
I liked how nicely you ended it. One should never give up on hope!
Take care!
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Thanks a lot! I am happy you liked it. 🥰
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Hey Arshnoor..🙌Lovely rhyming wordplay.Beautiful work with a amazing message.📝👏 It reminds me of the movie Lakshya😋
Keep shinning!😇
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Hey! I hope you are doing great. Thanks a ton. Means a lot 🥰🥰
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I am doing great and hoping same for you.
Have a great weekend ahead!
keep writing!🙌😇
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Well, haven’t seen that movie 😅. Btw can you send your blog post link. I am unable to open it up again.
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Please see that iconic movie whenever you will fetch the time.
I am sharing the link, a new story is posted and as usual your feedback is valuable for me.
https://prashanttscribbled.wordpress.com/2020/08/27/the-last-message/?preview=true
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Hey will be there soon!! Thanks for sharing.
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So beautiful, Arshnoor!!!
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Thank you so much! 🥰🥰🥰🥰
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And here comes one more masterpiece from you Arshnoor, this is great one!!😁
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😂😂🙈🙈Thanks a lot sir 😊😊🥰🥰
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So talented!
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Aw…that means so much!🥰
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Breaking the shell open,
Living as per your conditions.
Coming out of the den,
Moulding the conditions.
👌👌
Amazing !!👌
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Thanks a ton Dakshali! Hope you are doing good. 🥰
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Yeah… I’m great . Thank you for asking dear 💙
Hope you were doing great too !
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Yeah I am! 🥰🥰 stay safe and tc💞💞
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You too !💙💙
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🥰😊
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Really well written! 🙂
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I am glad you thought so. Thanks a ton dear! Stay safe and take care 🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Sometimes the shell feels too comfortable 😅
The last line though! Beautiful Arshnoor 🙂
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Indeed like a cosy cocoon. Thanks a ton!🥰🥰
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Beautifully expressed ☺️
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Aw…means so much to me 🥰
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wonderful
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Thanks a lot haroon 🥰🥰
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Breaking free of the ropes,
Standing by your toes.
Throwing away the hopes,
Is a big nope.
👌👌👌👌
beautifully written 💛
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Thanks a lot era! I am glad you liked it.
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💙🤗
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💞
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Compelling..need to break out of my shell too.
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You should. All the best 🥰🥰
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Rightly said.
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I am glad you thought so 🥰🥰
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Wonderful poem with rhyming words, Arshnoor!
But, at times, living inside the hopeful shell with no need to get of it can be a choice too.
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Indeed it can be a choice too!!. Thanks a lot. How are you?
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Awesome Arshnoor 👏🏼😊
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I am glad you enjoyed it!! How are doing?
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Good now after a flu episode 😊
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Oh! I didn’t know. Hope you are doing good.
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Yes Arshnoor all fine now 😊
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🥰😃
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Beautifully written, Arshnoor. Throwing away hope is a big no indeed. I’ve missed you. How have you been?
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Thanks a lot Shweta! Means so much to me.
I missed you too a lot. I am good.
How are you doing?
How’s office treating you miss tharoorian ?
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Haha.. I’m surprised that you remembered that name! Life is hectic with work, home and the work that brings. But I’m good. 😃
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All the best with everything and try to relax. 🥰🥰
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Thank you, dear. I’m trying my best. I hope you’re having a great Sunday
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Indeed! Thanks 💞
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Niicee🤩
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Thanks a ton dear!!
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